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Today I’m here to present to you my plan for become the President of the student concil.
My name is Paul I am 13 years old and I live in Luxembourg.
I have 3 big brothers Raphaël, Victor and Alexis.
My hobby is climbing and my favorite subject is french then I’m good for redaction and make statement.
I’m also hard-working, confident and outgoing.
Now place to my program :
First of all if I am elected , I envisage to organize more cultural outings, because i think that it is better for people to learn outside of the class to see things etc.
Next I also plan to extend the break for the student so they can be more relaxed and learn better and efficiently during the lessons.
Finaly
And don’t forget
“Take note, the right vote is Paul Jean for President” Thank you!