bonjour la prof d'anglais nous à demandé de corriger le texte suivant mais je ne sais pas si il y a d'autres fautes. Merci d'avance

About 240 million children with disabilities go to school in the world, which represents 1 in 10 children in the world.

Children with disabilities (motor, visual, auditory, physical, intellectual) are often alone and excluded from groups. The other children do not accept the difference of others. This is why more and more schools are creating inclusion classes so that they can be accepted by others and society. For example a hearing impaired child, the establishment of sign language lessons and a person to help him in class. For motor disabilities, the installation of a ramp, an elevator to facilitate movement.
More and more things are created to facilitate the integration of so-called "different" children.
However they are not very represented, for 25 years, 3944 advertisements referring to the handicap have been counted which represents 1% of the global market.
In the 1970s-1980s, showing the difference was almost impossible. Today, more and more people with a disability are present in fashion, in the cinema.
Between 2016 and 2021, the number of advertisements has almost tripled, going from 35 to 105.
In 2019, the face of Gucci is Ellie Goldstein, a young woman with Down syndrome.
Many film actors have a disability, such as Gater matazagz in "Stranger Thinks", Peter Dinklage in "Games of Thrones", Rj Mitte in "Breaking bad". Children with disabilities can identify with these people.

Finally, a lot of work remains to be done on this subject both at the school level and in advertising.
Even today, we see little advertising with children wearing a handcap. At Christmas time, in toy books, children with disabilities are never represented.​