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bonjour
Je dois faire la 4eme couverture d'un roman policier.
Je dois :
1. Invent a detective story
2. Utiliser les probabilités might, may et must
3. Le preterit
4. Preterit en ing
5. Passif
6. Lexique de l'equete policiere.

J'ai fais mon texte, mais je n'arrive a introduire les probabilités et j'ai besoin de votre aide.

Mon texte est le suivant :

14 july 2001, a party, alcohol, too much alcohol, fatigue,.... and it's the drama. A car accident that Emy could not have forgotten, except that yes! It is total amnesia. In the car opposite, he is dead. Emy will serve 20 years in prison.
When she gets out, she decides to go far away. To forget this drama even if she doesn't remember anything. New York for a new start. Emy moves into a small typical New York apartment building. Charming and discret neighbours. Emy is finally starting a new life. Steeve, a new tenant catches Emy's eye. A certain complicity will develop between them. Emy's life finally looks good. And yet, it is going to be a descent into hell.
Worrying things are going to happen :anonymous letters, damage to his flat,... until she finds her pet disemboweled on her doorstep. Who has a grudge against her and why? Could it be that Steeve has something to do with it or is it her past that is catching up with her? Detective Jonson will have to investigate and solve this mystery. Will he succeed?

Je oense que les probabilités peuvent etre intégrées vers la fin mais comment ? Si quelqu'un pouvait m'aider, merci par avance et j'imagine qu'il y a des fautes.
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Sagot :

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pour utiliser les probabilités il faut que tu puisse dire dans ton texte " il se pourrait que ce soit .. " / " c’est forcément lui " des trucs de ce style !

j’ai corriger tes fautes si tu veux :

July 14, 2001, a party, alcohol, too much alcohol, fatigue , .... and it's the drama. A car accident that Emy could not have forgotten, except that yes! It is the total amnesia. In the car opposite, he died. Emy will serve 20 years in prison. When she leaves, she decides to go far away. To forget this drama even if she doesn't remember anything. New York, a new beginning. Emy moves into a small typical New York building. Charming and discreet neighbors. Emy finally starts a new life. Steve, a new tenant attracts Emy's attention. A certain complicity will develop between them. Emy's life finally looks good. And yet, it will be a descent into hell. Disturbing things are going to happen: anonymous letters, damage in her apartment,... until she finds her pet disemboweled on her doorstep. Who wants it and why? Could Steve have something to do with it or is her past catching up with her? Detective Jonson will have to investigate and solve this mystery. Will he succeed?
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