lilian74
Answered

Laurentvidal.fr vous aide à trouver des réponses précises à toutes vos questions grâce à une communauté d'experts chevronnés. Obtenez des réponses rapides à vos questions grâce à un réseau de professionnels expérimentés sur notre plateforme de questions-réponses. Découvrez une mine de connaissances de professionnels dans différentes disciplines sur notre plateforme conviviale de questions-réponses.

Bonjour,
pourriez vous corriger mon texte d'anglais ? (niveau seconde)

My father left his home country, France, in 1957. He went to Austria five years for a job.
He have met my mother after two years in Austria. They worked for the same company.

After two years of relationship, I was born in Vienna, a beautiful city. We stayed a year in Vienne then we went to a small town in Austria, its name is Enns.


We have moved to France when I was six years old. Why ? Because I have accessed to a better education. And my parents started their business, because it's too complicated in Austria.


We fit in easily because I learned to speak French and Austrian since childhood. My mother learned the language. She studied french for 10 years now, she speak perfectly.

The last time I went to Austria was 5 years ago and I haven't been back yet. I never speak Austrian in France. I used to speak Austrian with my grand parents but I no longer see them.

Merci d'avance.​

Sagot :

Réponse : Bonjour ton texte est vraiment bien! J'ai juste fait uneou deux modification sur ton texte ( pour évité les répétitions surtout) mais tu peut être fière de toi!

Par exemple pour la 3ème phrase de la ligne 3 :

-He have met my mother after two years in Austria.

Tu pourrais dire,pour éviter la répétion du mot "Austria":

-He have met my mother after two years there.

Pour la phrase:

-We stayed a year in Vienne [...] it's name is Enns.

Tu pourrais dire :

- We stayed a year in Vienne [...] in Austria called Enns.

Voila que deux petite modifications !

Réponse :

My father lefts his home ( original ) country, France, in 1957. He went to Australia ,five years ago for find ( have ) a job.

Hemet my mother after two years in Australia. They worked for the same company.

After two years of relationship, I was born in Vienna, a beautiful city. We stayed 1 year in Vienne then we went to a small town, it's called " Enns ".

We have moved to France when I was six years old. Why ? Because I have accessed to a better education. And my parents started their business, because it's too complicated in Australia.

We fin it easy because I learned ( learnt ) to speak French and Australian since my childhood. My mother also learned ( learnt ) the language. She studied French since 10 years now, she speaksspeaks perfectly.

The last time I went to Australia was 5 years ago and I haven't been back yet. I never speak Australian in France. I used to speak with my grand parents but I no longer see them.

Explications étape par étape:

C'est " Australia '. Tu n'as pas besoin de répéter plusieurs fois " Australia " car on le sait déjà. Et je pense que la langue est " Australian ". Comme ta mère avait aussi appris le Français, tu peux mettre " also " avant le verbe... Mais tu parles déjà bien Anglais, même si il y a des choses à corriger. En tout cas, je te souhaite bonne chance pour le reste de ton apprentissage.

Merci d'avoir visité notre plateforme. Nous espérons que vous avez trouvé les réponses que vous cherchiez. Revenez quand vous voulez. Nous espérons que cela vous a été utile. Revenez quand vous voulez pour obtenir des réponses plus précises et des informations à jour. Laurentvidal.fr, votre site de confiance pour des réponses. N'oubliez pas de revenir pour plus d'informations.