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Bonjour vous pouvez me dire si mon texte est bon ?
Hi everyone, I’m going to introduce you my accompaniment day in Paris.
With the class we went to Paris for 5 days.
We spent our nights at the fiap youth hostel, located in the thirteenth district of paris.
I started my accompaniment day the first day, it was really stressful because we were the first to pass.
So around 4 p.m. we gathered the students in the hall of the youth hostel; we explained to them what we were going to do during and the safety instructions.
Then we walked for approximately 10minutes and we took the subway to go to the Louvre museulm.
When we arrived we split the class into two. Malorie et lauriane took group 1 and razia and I took the second group.
Each group took their own itinerary but we had the same monuments to visited.
So I started with the Louvre museum. I explained the history of this museum. I asked some questions to my group and I showed them some pictures. Then we followed razia to the tuileries garden, the palais royal and the opera garnier and she explained to us the history of these monuments, she gave us some anecdote and she show us pictures of the interior of these monuments. Then it was my turn, i presented the galerie lafayette, we saw the famous christmas showcase and then we went inside to see the huge Christmas tree, it was really amazing. And due to lack of time we were not able to go to the concrode's place.
Around 8pm we went to eat at the Champs Elysées and at about 8pm, we went to eat at the Champs Elysées and at 9pm we climbed the 284 steps of the Arc de Triomphe.
then around 11pm we went back to the youth hostel

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Réponse:

Salut! mon anglais n'est pas parfait mais j'ai lu ton texte et il me semble que tout est bon :)

Pour ma part je le trouve assez bien !!
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