Bonjour, voici la correction complète de ton texte et mes explications pour t'aider à progresser en Anglais.
Texte Original :
Food what everyone likes, the food But its depends because meat are animals and vegetarians do not eat it. Vegetarians Eat a lot of vegetables like the Eat a lot of vegetables like salad, starchy foods and cereals, fruits and vegetables. Then there are people follow the diet of vegetarians, These are people who eat but sometimes eat meat, fish and other "animal products".
Texte Corrigé :
It's a food that everyone does like, but its depends because meat are at the begining some animals and that's why vegetarians don't eat meat. Vegetarians eat a lot of vegetables like salad, starchy foods, cereals, and fruits. Then, there are also some people following the diet of vegetarians, These people who eat like vegetarians, but sometimes they can eat meat, fish and other "animal products", which is different from the vegetarians who will never eat anything that could have been alive.
Observations :
Tu fais beaucoup d'erreurs d'inattention en recopiant plusieurs fois les mêmes phrases. Cela peut te poser des problèmes lors d'un examen. Je te conseil de bien te relire et aussi de revoir l'emploi des mots tel que "who & that", qui eux aussi rendent ton texte parfois confus. Sinon ton texte est plutôt cohérent. On comprend bien ce que tu exprimes.
Excellente journée à toi et bonne chance !
Muneeb
