bjr je dois faire une presentation a ma classe sur central park et leur donner envie d'y aller, pouvez vous me dire où sont les fautes svp?

Central park is a huge urban park situated in Manhattan. It is a greenful landmark with somptuous lakes and wonderful trees and bushes. The mall is the perfect place to go if you want to enjoy a walk. You will be surounded by wonderful trees, which will give you an unique feeling of security and tranquility. This is simply the best place in New York to take a break from the stressful atmosphere of the city. In this park, you can walk around, jogging or simply relax while looking at this extraordinary scenery, which will give you the impression of being in the middle of nature, in the middle of NY.
In Central Park, you can also eat some delicious meals at the Tavern on the Green, which seems to come straight out a fairy tale, or visit Central Park zoo, a small but one the most entertaining zoo in the world.
For those who like wonderful monuments, the park also contains some amazing ones like the metropolitan museum of art, one of the largest and finest art museum of the world, or the Belvedere castle, which is one of the most faithful reproduction of an Irish castle, where you can admire the antonishing landscape of central park. In this park, you can also see some brilliant sculptures like Alice in Wonderland, Romeo and Juliet or Bathesda Fontain.
Central park is definitely a New York city icon, it is the most filmed location in the world and it welcomes approximately 38 million visitors per year, which proves that is one of the most beautiful places in the world. Once you have visited this marvelous place, you can practically die in peace.