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Pouvez vous s'il vous plaît corriger mon devoir en anglais.
c'est une lettre de motivation:
16 years old and currently in 1st grade at AIRBUS high school in Toulouse. I am writing to you to request an internship that will take place from 24/05/2021 to 18/06/2021. I am passionate about aeronautics for years and I plan later to work in this field. I participated in open days, I participated in the competition of the patent of initiation to aeronautics, I made my internship of 3éme in the National School of Civil Aviation (ENAC) in which I had the opportunity to enrich my knowledge and these discoveries have motivated me to integrate the aeronautical education in the school AIRBUS. I wish to do the same if you give me the opportunity to do this internship in your group airbus helicopter. I am a serious student, listening, and applied. It is in this state of mind, that I allowed myself to request you to allow me to realize my internship in your team of experienced workers. In the expectation of a favorable follow-up to my request, I thank you infinitely for the attention paid to my request ​

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stanybrenaud

Réponse :

Salut! Tu n'as presque pas fait de fautes :)

Six years old and currently in 1st grade at AIRBUS high school in Toulouse. I am writing to you to request an internship that will take place from 24/05/2021 to 18/06/2021. I am passionate about aeronautics for years and I plan later to work in this field. I participated in open days, I participated in the competition of the patent of initiation to aeronautics, I made my internship at 3éme in the National School of Civil Aviation (ENAC) in which I had the opportunity to enrich my knowledge and these discoveries have motivated me to integrate the aeronautical education in the school AIRBUS. I wish to do the same if you allow me to do this internship in your group airbus helicopter. I am a serious student, listening, and applied. It is in this state of mind, that I allowed myself to request you to allow me to realize my internship in your team of experienced workers. In the expectation of a favorable follow-up to my request, I thank you infinitely for the attention paid to my request.

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