Réponse :
It was a summer day, I was playing on the swing outside. I was reading a man's when I hear my sister scream. I thought that there was a short or snake I took a look and I went down the stairs to come and see my sister. There was my sister in the ground facing a big man my cat was terrified of.i was also terrified by this scene. This man had a very dark face,he seemed very attended. After 19 second I ran to get my sister and I went in the first room of the house that I saw. I thought I should not turn aroundor he would catch me. I put my sister down and told her to give in the bathroom and I went to get a knife in the kitchen but I saw him running along the house. After this, I went into the bathroom and locked us up. I was trying to reassure my sister my sister who was crime when I here the door knob move by itself. As the bathroom was in the ground floor , we escaped through the windows windows and then took refuge with the neighbours. Then, the police arrived, they investigated our house and some footprints were found. He was not a burglar. This strange man was never found.
Explications :
Il y avais quelques fautes mais peu. N'oublie pas tout ton texte est au passé d'une tout très verbes conjugués souvent être au past simple ou past continuous
