bsr aurait il quelqu'un qui pourrait me corrigé mes fautes d orthographe,si j'ai bien mis des connecteurs et si j'ai bien mis au preterite svp
hello let me introduce myself my name is jakes. I'll tell you my horrible story. I was walking one evening in the harbor near my house, I saw a man from nowhere taking me I do not know where. I ended up on a pirate ship, I knew that because I saw a black flag with a skull on it. I was locked in a cage, the lock was locked with a piece of junk. I suffered for several days without eating or drinking. I noticed on this boat an old acquaintance who was captured and who ended up being their slave. She brought me water and bread.
_I asked him: do you remember me
she replied: yes
I begged her to try to free me from this hassle
she accepted my request.
Two days later, while the guards were sleeping, she sneaked among them and retrieved the keys to the cage, immediately came to me and quietly opened the door. I thanked her with all my heart.
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