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Bonjour j’aimerais que vous corrigiez mon texte s’il vous plaît.


Yes, I really love Halloween, it's a great party!
First I like to read legends and Halloween books , they are scary.
I also love Halloween decorations like fake spider webs or pumpkins that are often found in front of houses.
The coolest thing for Halloween is the horror movie, I really like doll movies, clown movies or thrillers, they are so terrifying it's really funny to watch them with friends.
By the way, anyone can party with their friends, it's simple but really fun.
On Halloween you can go out asking for candies , the most fun is to eat candies of course you can do it with your friends and family.
Finally, we are going to talk about my favorite part, the makeup and the costumes, this is my favorite part because it is about creativity.
I like makeup a lot because it is often so beautiful and you can do a lot of scary makeup or not for children for example.
And I like the costumes they are always beautiful I also like the costumes of famous people because they are really original.

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Yes, I really love Halloween, it's a great party!

At first I like to read legends and Halloween books, they are scary.

I also love Halloween decorations like the fake cobwebs or pumpkins that are often found in front of houses.

The coolest thing for Halloween is the horror movie, I really like doll movies, clown movies or thrillers, they are so terrifying it's really funny to watch them with friends.

By the way, anyone can party with their friends, it's simple but really fun.

On Halloween you can go out and ask for candy, the most fun is to eat them of course you can do that with your friends and family.

Finally, we are going to talk about my favorite part, the makeup and the costumes, this is my favorite part because it is about creativity.

I like makeup a lot because it is often so beautiful and you can do a lot of scary makeup or not for children for example.

And I like the costumes they are always beautiful I also like the costumes of famous people because they are really original.

voila, je t'ai juste corrigé la phrase en gras, car je trouvais que tu te repetais un peut avec les bonbons. mais sinon, je le trouve tres bien !

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