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expl last summer my family and I went to South Asia, we slept at a traditional house that I had a weird feeling about.
While I had a hard time sleeping, I got up to make myself something to eat, when I got to the kitchen and opened the cabinet a ginormous creature jumped out of it, it was big and all dark as vampire teeth and wolf ears covered in a weird smelling substance that got in to my shirt it looked like blood, I got so scared that I peed my pants. In my fear I ran faster than ever. The creature was following me it had cow feet that were making an absurdly loud sound it had also a long brown tail that slapped me while running ,when I got out of the house I stoped running for a second, the beast wasn’t here anymore I was going to sneak out from the back of the house to wake up my family but stepped on something and went unconscious.
Désolée pour le temps je suis habitué à écrire au passé arrange ce texte au niveau des temps et rajoute des détails j’espère que ça va t’aider
