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Hi everyone can you please help to correct this writing.
Thousands of people suffer from a lot of problems and one of these is poverty.
Concerning causes,war and politics problems is a major causes of the poverty,many people leave their countries in order to keep their families safe,Consequently,they become poor and unemployed because they can't engage in a new country.Besides,lack of high education cause of increasing of poverty,people can't find a good job because they are illiterate,so for this reason,they have many difficulties. Moreover,lack of social equality create a huge difference between rich people who become poorer and miserable.
Regarding effects,many people beggar or make crimes in order to afford basic needs like:food ,medicine.... Furthermore,youg people immigrate to Europe to look for a better life and change their financial problems. Besides,other people can be depressed and think of suicide.
As solutions,government should hire youg people and give them a high education to improve their skills and become respectful and responsible.
TO sum up,I think that we should all work hard and help each other in order to fight this social issue.


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