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svp aidez moi à corriger, je dois faire une présentation pour être délégué en anglais :Hi my name is Alix, I’m 14 years old and I’m in year 10 at La Cordeille.
I’m shy and nervous to give this speech but I’m also very determined to be class president this year. I’m very open minded and cheerful.
I remember that when I was in year 6, two students in my class hate eachother for no reason and it made a bad athmosphere in our class. So, I decided to talk the teacher about this and he also noticed that so he wanted to help me for they have a better relationship. I decided to organize a discusion between them. They talked during 15 minutes and they realized that they have no reason to hate eachother. They even became best friends !
For this anecdote I think I would be a good class president for have better relationships between students.
I want to people trust me and make the right choice : vote for me
Vote Alix for better class and a better world !

Sagot :

Réponse :

two students in my class hated eachother pas hate, help me for them to have a better relationship,

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SweetLily

Réponse:

Two students in my class hated each other, I decided to talk to the teacher to help me so that they have a better relationship,... realized that they had no reason to hate each other ... good class president for having good relationship ... I want people to trust me

des petites fautes au niveau de la grammaire mais le reste c'est bien

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