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Bonjour , j'aimerais vérifier l'orthographe et savoir si mon texte anglais est plutôt logique, le voici :
Thank-you all for coming today
My name is Solenne and I’m here to talk about the self-esteem that is for me the key to success.
The order of the presentation is as follow :
First of all I will be looking at personal development
Then I will move onto self esteem
Thirdly, we will discuss success
I will be taking questions at the end so feel free to make a note of them as we go through

I-personal development

Firstly, self-esteem emanates from personal development.
Personal development is a global process of reflection on oneself and of exploiting one’s potential in order to improve the quality of one’s life and to realize one’s profound aspirations.
I am convinced that this subject is important because it aims to make us more fulfilled and happy in our life.

II- self esteem

In most cases one of the most significant features is self esteem, because it is linked to the way you live your life, you choose your studies, you choose your job, you choose your partner in life, you choose your circle of friends, you accept or you give up the challenge in short it is the foundation of different areas.

III- success
indeed self-esteem will play an important role in the success of anything you undertake
Moreover, self-esteem helps the individual to seek innovative solutions adapted to the current situation. Supported by self-confidence, he will be able to take measured risks, show the tenacity and perseverance needed to complete the project.
Instead of seeing misfortunes in one’s failures, the person supported by self-esteem and self-confidence will see it as an opportunity to learn and to proceed differently. Nothing will question his personal value; only his acts can be revised if necessary.
The success achieved will obviously feed this self-confidence and self-esteem.
thus a virtuous circle is established.

Conclusion
To sum up what I’ve just said, Self-esteem is earned at all levels,
Some personal development practices will result in a healthier and more “friendly” relationship with oneself.
I hope this has been informative and useful for you and would like to thank you all for your attention.

Sagot :

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Réponse :

Bonjour

Thank-you all for coming today

My name is Solenne and I’m here to talk about the self-esteem that is for me the key to success.

The order of the presentation is as follow :

First I will be looking at personal development

Then I will move onto self esteem

Next, we will discuss success  and finally I will be taking questions at the end so feel free to take notes of them as we go through

I-personal development

Firstly, self-esteem emanates from personal development.

Personal development is a global process of reflection on oneself and of exploiting one’s potential in order to improve the quality of one’s life and to realize one’s profound aspirations.

I am convinced that this subject is important because it aims to  develop us and make us happy in our life.

II- self esteem

In most cases one of the most significant features is self esteem, because it is linked to the way you live your life, you choose your studies, you choose your job, you choose your partner in life, you choose your circle of friends, you accept or you give up the challenge in short it is the foundation of different areas.

III- success

Indeed self-esteem will play an important role in the success of anything you undertake

Moreover, self-esteem helps the individual to seek innovative solutions adapted to the current situation. Supported by self-confidence, he will be able to take measured risks, show the tenacity and perseverance needed to complete the project.

Instead of seeing misfortunes in one’s failures, the person supported by self-esteem and self-confidence will see it as an opportunity to learn and to proceed differently. Nothing will question his personal value; only his acts can be revised if necessary.

The success achieved will obviously feed this self-confidence and self-esteem.

thus a virtuous circle is established.

Conclusion

To sum up what I’ve just said, Self-esteem is earned at all levels,

Some personal development practices will result in a healthier and more “friendly” relationship with oneself.

I hope this has been informative and useful for you and  i would like to thank you all for your attention.

Explications :

C'est plutôt bon je t'ai mis en gras les erreurs que tu as fait

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