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Bonjour, pouvez-vous me corriger s'il vous plaît, faut que les verbes soient tous au passé et qu il y a au moins deux phrases de superlatifs et comparatifs. Merci d'avance !
Last week I was in New York and it was absolutely amazing! First I was visited The Statue of Liberty by taking the ferry from Ballery Park which had cost me five dollars. The entrance to the monument cost me $17. When I entered I had admired the replica of the flame held by the statue in his hand and then I was able to climb to the top to admire the view of the surroundings and Manhanttan. Then I went to Ellis Island. It was rewarding and informative! The next day, taking the taxi I went to see the Metropolitan Museum. It was huge! The most impressive was the ancient Egypt part which is exceptionally highlighted. The Metropolitan Museum is the largest museum in New York. Tickets were starting at $74?77.
For Wednesday, I had been to see New York City Fire Museum which is one of the smallest museum in New York. It is a beautiful little museum containing lots of objects that showed the evolution of the fireman's profession since its inception. It was monumental! The rate was $8.
As One World Observatory was a stone's throw away, I had walked there. It was the tallest tower in North America. It was higher than the Statue of Liberty. It was very amazing to see all of York from above. There was an amazing view. It cost me $20.96.
And finally for the last day, I had gone by train to Central Parks. It was a joy to walk in the huge green space. I had been able to access a lot of places. It was a relaxing place. It's absolutely unavoidable!'

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Last week I was in New York and it was absolutely amazing! First I visited The Statue of Liberty by taking the ferry from Ballery Park which had cost me five dollars. The entrance to the monument cost me $17. When I entered I had admired the replica of the flame held by the statue in his hand and then I was able to climb to the top to admire the view of the surroundings and Manhanttan. After I went to Ellis Island. It was rewarding and informative! The next day, I took the taxi however I went to see the Metropolitan Museum. It was huge! The most impressive was the ancient Egypt part which is exceptionally highlighted. The Metropolitan Museum is the largest museum in New York. Whereas the Tickets were starting at $74?77.

For Wednesday, I had been able to see New York City Fire Museum which is one of the smallest museum in New York. It is a beautiful little museum containing lots of objects that showed the evolution of the fireman's profession since its inception. It was monumental! The rate was $8.

As One World Observatory was a stone's throw away, I had walked there. It was the tallest tower in North America so It was higher than the Statue of Liberty. In my opinion It was very amazing to see all of York from above. There was an amazing view. It cost me $20.96 less than the entrance to the monument.

And finally for the last day, I had gone by train to Central Parks so I think it was a joy to walk in the huge green space also I had been able to access a lot of places. It was a relaxing place. It's absolutely unavoidable!'

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