Salut, serait-il possible de me dire si il y a des erreurs dans mon histoire, elle est censée être au prétérit simple + prétérit be+ing, j'ai fais au mieux ! :p
Hello, my name is Anna and I have 16 years old.
One day, when I had organised one evening with my friends Lincoln and Jack, we decided to go to an abandoned house at five minutes from my house.
It was a big dilapidated house, the rumors said this house was haunted. The windows were smashed and the door was broke. We were setting up our mattresses when suddenly we heard strange noises; it sounded like a screams. We are scared, Jack went to see where this scream are coming, they are coming from the bedroom on the second floor. Suddenly the door was closing behind him, he got stuck. Lincoln and I go searched Jack, we found this room he was locked in but we heard no sign of life. We managed to open the door, Jack's body was lying on the bed, Jack was dead. We run away from this house, I thought I saw a ghost in the bathroom, but Lincoln didn't want to stop. When we got out, I looked at the house one last time, there was a ghost at the window.
The rumors were real, this house was haunted.
