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Bonjour pouvez vérifier si il y’a des erreurs dans ma rédaction d’anglais je devais raconter une journée au prétérit.

The last saturday , i went to my bestfriend House , Neïcya , i lived
close to her house but i moved out recently. We were suppose to go
to the mall but it was raining so we stayed at home. We watched
a movies, it was "Annie", the film talked about a little girl Annie
who is an Orphelin and she is trying to find her parents. It was
very interinsting , After that we left to the pizzeria to eat, we
both took two pizzas because we were so hungry! Mine was
delicious! then we went back home played to the Sims 4 and
talked for hours and hours, the time passed, the afternoon
the rain stopped so we went outside and played at the parc,
We were sliding off the tobogan, but my friends had hit
a stone She hurt her little toes since she wast fine we
went back home, and i tried to confort her. The pain had
passed so we were laughing and talking it started to get late
So I went back at my house. It was a really good day.

Sagot :

mademoiselnasty

Salut !

Réponse :

The last saturday, I went to my bestfriend's house, Neïcya. I lived close to her but I moved out recently. We were suppose to go to the mall but it was raining so we stayed at home. We watched a movie, the movie talked about a little girl, "Annie" who's an orphelin and who's trying to find her parents. It was very interesting.

After that, we went to the pizzeria to eat, we both took two pizzas bc (because) we were very hungry ! Mine was delicious !

Then, we went back home and we played to the Sims 4, we talked for hours and hours, the time has passed, and in the afternoon, the rain stopped so we went outside and played at the park.

We were sliding down the slide until my friend got hurt by a stone. She hurt her little toes so we waited until she was fine and we went back home. There, I tried to confort her. The pain has passed away so we were laughing and talking. It was getting late so I went back at my house/place.

It was a really good day !

J'espère que ça t'aideras ! Désolée pour les fautes au passage !

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