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Hello everyone welcome to YouTube channel I hope you are okay I will introduce myself: My name is leanaI was 16 years old, I was born in Nancy, but I live in Paris . My parents are married, I have an older brother who is 19 years old and a younger sister who is 11 years old. In real life I am a happy, calm, mature, funny, trustworthy girl. My favorite time past is reading books my favorite ones are: Anne Frank’s diary, the photo that kills, screams of Laurent Gaudé. Shop with my friends and go to the movies. I like watching netflix series and films, reports and documentaries. My favorite channels are: Victoria Chalton, Arte, Brut, It starts today. I like listening to Pop and Classical music. I like to visit museums of monuments and historic sites, I like to go out with my friends, go shopping, travel and read magazines. My favorite subjects are: English, history, French. The subjects I have shortcomings are math. I don’t like snakes, mangas, comics and broccoli. Later in the future, I would like to be a lawyer for business lawyers and archeologist. These are two professions that interest me. Don’t forget to turn on notifications to be aware of each video and leave a comment and release a little blue thumb it always pleases