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Bonsoir, Pouvez vous Svp me corriger mon discours, me dire si j'ai fais des erreurs. Merci d'avance

Dear compatriots,

The first thing I would like to say is thank you for coming. I am very glade to see you today. And I would like to thanks members of the Harvard Corporation who gave me an extraordinary honor. You know what, I’m doing everything for that you pay my attention because I hate people who don’t listen to me when I talk. And I’m sure you’re bored with my unnecessary thanks so let me start.

Actually, today I want to share with you that every painful story has a successful ending, so accept the pain and get ready for success. Seriously, you don’t need to be sad because more you will try and more you will learn so never give up and try again more and more. You know, today I am very annoy to talk in front of all this people but I don’t give up, I am still going on. When I failed I learned that striving for success without hard work is like trying to harvest where you haven’t planted.

Now, I have decided to talk to you about my own failure. My biggest failure was when I was registering for a catwalk show and they refused because I was too fat compared to the others models. And you know what the casting director said. He said I’m not really fit because I am not quite as tall as the other girls. I felt so ashamed that I did everything to lose weight and now as you can see I’m a very famous model.


Sagot :

Bonjour,

Je ne vois pas des erreurs mais tu pouvais dire un peu plus à la fin je crois!

And I’m sure you’re bored...

You know, today I am very annoy to talk in front of all this people...

Cela me semble un peu bizzare mais si tu veux peux !

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