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During this confinement I got bored I made new friends on Minecraft I learned that I am stronger in online course when normal contest and that without all the people who disturbs in class the course goes better and I understand better. I also learned that no matter how far apart people are there there is internet which allows them to chat play and see each other for me put people in containment and a good idea to avoid coronavirus infection But I didn't like him taking the patent away. Between Monday and Friday I wake up every day at 7.55 a.m. and from 7.55 a.m. until 3.00 p.m. I studied and then I played Fortnite or Minecraft, yes I go and sleep. During the day Saturday and Sunday I play a little with my little brother I go out I play basketball sometimes and I play fortnite. I would like the containment to end as quickly as possible. ​

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bonjour

During this lockdown, I got bored, I made new friends on Minecraft, I learned that I'm stronger in online courses when there's normal competition, and without all the people disturbing in class, the course goes better and I understand better. I also learned that no matter how far apart people are, there's the Internet that allows them to chat, play, and see each other, for me, putting people in containment and a good idea to avoid coronavirus infection But I didn't like that he withdrew the patent. Between Monday and Friday, I wake up every day at 7:55 am and from 7:55 am to 3:00 pm, I studied and then I played Fortnite or Minecraft, yes I go to sleep. During the day, Saturday and Sunday, I play a little bit with my little brother, I go out, I play basketball sometimes and I play Fortnite. I'd like the lockdown to end as soon as possible

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