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To what extent have the 2012 Olympics contributed to the development of the country and capital?
The 2012 Summer Olympics take place from July 27 to August 12, 2012 in London. The British capital is the first city to host the modern Olympics for the third time. I would talk about the economic balance sheet, the social balance sheet, the political balance sheet and finally the urban balance sheet.
To conclude this article, we could therefore see that London was a very attractive city during the 2012 Olympic Games but that this event had many repercussions both positive and negative in the short and long term. The investment was significant, but some specialists believe that it will be profitable in a few years. However, the organization of this event also had environmental damages. On one hand following the construction of the whole village and on the other hand, as a result of the rubbish thrown away and neglected by tourists.I chose to present this theme because I love sport very much and I would like one day to be able to go as a tourist to see the sportsmen and women at the Olympic Games.
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