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Bonjour,
je suis une élève en première AA,j'ai un projet à l'oral sur un carnet à réaliser ,ce projet me tiens à cœur mais j'ai beaucoup de mal avec l'anglais.Bref j'ai écrit un texte expliquant sa conception;le tutoriel et les avantages.J'aimerais vraiment que quelqu'un m'aide à corriger ce texte (ou je me suis aidée majoritairement de deepl ;x;) ,je sens qu'il y' a des choses à relever et j'aimerais avoir des conseils pour m'améliorer en anglais merci :)

Le texte concerné:
Today we are going to present ,now we are going to present 2 main parts.First, how we thought about the design of our notebook then we will explain the tutorial of our notebook and finally what are these advantages.For the notebook, we took into account the means of the people in the class, we saw that everyone does not have the same resources, so we based ourselves on materials that everyone can have: cardboard, paper, glue, scissors and a ruler.In the end we worked on the structure of the notebook rather than on the elements .So we chose a U-binding, like a binder in fact. It allows for more things to be added. As for the notebook elements, we gave people freedom to have diversity in the notebooks and allowed people to express their creativity on what they want to do and not be restricted to a single model, that's our main goal to allow people to design their own idea.After talking about the design of the notebook, we will show you how to create the notebook:To make the notebook: You need some cardboard; scissors; eraser; glue; a ruler and a pencil.To make the cover cut a rectangle 20 cm long and 34 cm wide with paper or cardboard. To make the 4 cm slice for the cover, make two folds:first folds of 15 cm and second folds of 19 cm. To make the decorative slice of the notebook.Cut 2 strips of 20x8 cm of paper or cardboard.Then for the outer slice:. the first strip you have to make a fold of 1.8 cm on each side.And for the inner slice: the second strip make a fold of 2 cm.Put glue on the sides and place on the cover this way(cf partie 2.3).And now you can decorate the cover as you like.For the pages, cut a rectangle of 28x18cm . to make the slice make 2 folds:first folds:13,8cm and second folds:14,8cm. Make the same for the 5 pagesFor the binding cut a 18x3.6 cm strip, then draw a straight line every 0.4 cm. Paste the slices of the pages in each space select like this.Then press to fix the pages correctly.When all the pages are pasted, paste the strip onto the slice of the inside cover.You have finished the structure of your book. So our notebook is transportable; it has a rigid binding that accommodates more items. You also have the choice to choose your items and personalize your notebook (the cover;the interior;the layout, etc.). So you have a notebook of your own.If you don't have too many ideas about the items in the notebook you can take inspiration from scrapbooking;origami;bullet journal... Finally, our notebook contains 3 great ideas: Accessible; Free and Diversity.

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Today we are going to talk about [le sujet de la presentation ici} ,now let us present the 3 main parts. The first part is about what we thought about the design of our notebook. Then we will explain the design of our notebook and how we made it. Finally, all its advantages.

For the notebook, we took into account the means of the people in the class, we saw that everyone does not have the same resources, so we based ourselves on materials that everyone could find: cardboard, paper, glue, scissors and a ruler. In the end we worked more on the structure of the notebook than on the design elements.

So we chose a U-binding, like a binder in fact. It allows for more things to be added. As for the design elements, we gave people freedom to have diversity in the notebooks and allowed people to express their creativity on what they want to do and not be restricted to a single model, that's our main goal : to allow people to design their own idea.

We will now show you how to create the notebook:

You will need some cardboard; scissors; eraser; glue; a ruler and a pencil.To make the cover cut a 20 cm long rectangle and 34 cm wide with paper or cardboard. To make the 4 cm slice for the cover, make two folds: first fold is 15 cm and second fold is 19 cm. To make the decorative part of the notebook: Cut 2 strips of 20x8 cm of paper or cardboard, then for the outer part: use the first strip you have to make a fold of 1.8 cm on each side. And for the inner part : use the second strip make a fold of 2 cm. Put glue on the sides and place on the cover this way (cf partie 2.3). And now you can decorate the cover as you like. For the pages, cut a rectangle of 28x18cm. To make the slice make 2 folds: first folds: 13,8cm and second folds: 14,8cm. Make the same for the 5 pages For the binding cut a 18x3.6 cm strip, then draw a straight line every 0.4 cm. Paste the slices of the pages in each space select like this.Then press to glue the pages correctly. When all the pages are pasted, paste the strip onto the slice of the inside cover.

You have finished the structure of your book. So our notebook is transportable; it has a rigid binding that accommodates more items. You also have the choice to choose your items and personalize your notebook (the cover; the interior; the layout, etc.). You now have a notebook of your own. If you don't have any ideas for the design elements for the notebook you can take inspiration from scrapbooking; origami; bullet journal...

To end our presentation, we would like to talk about the values our notebook contains : Accessibility; Freedom and Diversity.

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