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Today, science evolves and creates new robots. Robots can be as helpful as dangerous. Then how is it at work? We'll first see the helpful aspects of robots and besides the dangerous aspects.
On the one hand, robots can be very helpful at work. It cans help for a lot of jobs and works, like printing or stocking data. People can trust what a robot do because they always give us right informations. Robots have already helped a lot of industries and compagnies to grow up, that conveys its trustworthiness.
On the other hand, robots can be dangerous too.
Hackers can infiltrate networks to steal informations and use it for their own plans. Besides, some malfunctions can appear. In that case, robots make mistakes and the more they have an important place, the more the consequences will be serious.
So we saw that robots are really helpful at work but people shouldn't give them responsabilities because of their vulnerability. They are very dangerous too, and some industries already fell because of that. If humanity relies on robots, humans will be quickly sidelined. Companies are based on improvement and research on artificial intelligence: One day, robots may even take the place of men in the world, who knows...

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Today, science evolves and creates new robots. Robots can be as helpful as dangerous. Then how does it work? We'll first see the helpful aspects of robots and then the dangerous aspects.

On the one hand, robots can be very helpful at work. It can help for a lot of jobs and works, like printing or stocking data. People can trust what a robot does because it always gives the right informations. Robots have already helped a lot of industries and compagnies to grow up, that conveys its trustworthiness.

On the other hand, robots can be dangerous too.

Hackers can infiltrate networks to steal informations and use it for their own plans. Also, some malfunctions can appear. In that case, robots make mistakes and the more they have an important place, the more the consequences will be serious.

So we saw that robots are really helpful at work but people shouldn't give them responsabilities because of their vulnerability. They are very dangerous too, and some industries already fell because of that. If humanity relies on robots, humans will be quickly sidelined. Companies are based on improvement and research on artificial intelligence: One day, robots may even take the place of men in the world, who knows...

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